Inge Haupt

Chewing Cud

The Soul’s Passage

The souls line up like a million stars,
A river of billowing light and song.
Before them a passage of hours and days,
Behind them the throng
Of heaven’s voices.
Their wing tips humming with the deep thrumb
Of creation.
For behind and below and betwixt and before
Suns, moons, stars and galaxies fall
And rise,
Spinning.
Their incandescent song praising celestial choices.

The passage forged in the bowels of the earth
With fire and brimstone and hands of despair,
Coiled and contorted on a blistering potter’s wheel,
Then finally released into netherwhere.

Born into limbo,
Its cold, hot heart begins to beat;
Its diamond sides glow and pulsate with a soft, low song;
Its spirit awakens and is ready

To beat, burst, thrust
From the belly of the earth;
Through the tearing pain of the mother’s womb,
Through the brimming tears of the father’s soul,
Through space, through time, through the highest hereafter
To the brink of nothingness,
Where stars sing, angels thrumb
And light-clad souls stand at the threshold of eternity.

She glances down at her iridescence,
Diamond-clad soul with the fate of mankind clasped to her breast.
Beside her, the thick cocoon of joy and song
Is rent.

Into the bellowing breach, darkness bubbles through.

A screaming, fearing, thrashing pierces the throng,
Forcing its way through the billowing light and song,
As warders bring her, the doomèd one.

The closer she gets to her passage of pain
The fainter her glow.
Her cloth of light and song fade
As she is torn from divinity;
Light shredded from her being
on the grater of Godless servitude.

Clothed in darkness
And forced to eat the bitter stew
That no mother’s pity, nor father’s sweat could assuage.

4 Comments »

  AR wrote @

“Netherwhere” – I see you enjoy putting together new terms, as I do. It’s almost necessary in poetry, I think. If only more people would read poetry…but somehow we’ve gotten the idea that art is only for a few. Sad.

Do you consider yourself a proffessional or an amateur?

This poem in particular is visual, vibrant, and moving.

  ingehaupt wrote @

Thanks for your comment. Unfortunately I can’t seem to load your URL, so I can’t see your blog. I am new at this, so I might be doing something stupid…
I also wish that we could somehow make people read more poetry – I’ve been trying to come up with some sort of world-wide poetry coup (as it were) for years. But for now I’ll just keep writing.
I can’t claim to be professional as I haven’t had anything printed in ink yet – or been paid for my work yet. But hopefully it’ll happen soon.
These few were actually written for an assignment for my degree – so it’s nice to get feedback from someone other than a lecturer.

  AR wrote @

I’m a little confused on a few WordPress things too. This might have fixed the link, I don’t know.

If not, it’s http://alanaroberts.wordpress.com

May I ask what degree you are earning/have earned? (Sorry if I missed it elsewhere on the blog.)

Yes, keep writing. Another thing I believe in is reading all kinds of poetry to children before they can even understand the words. I think poetry is made so that the delight comes before the understanding…if you don’t enjoy it you don’t get it. So my theory is that the more children are brought up to enjoy the sounds of poetry, the more adults will later appreciate the meaning and function.

  J Smith Anonymous wrote @

RE: “Netherwhere”
I believe that you are both correct in assuming it is good to put together new terms. Nice one..
Shakespeare invented over 1700 new words, did he not?

As for making people read more poetry..mmm.
The Internet is a good start. But at the end of the day it is a specific type of person who likes, loves or hates poetry. In my humble opinion anyhow. Education, introduction to and access to poetry within our many diverse cultures also play a role I believe.

I think you will be amazed at how many people actually DO read (and appreciate) poetry, dear Inge. Yet, it is not everybody’s cup of tea.

However, as people mature, then (usually) their appreciation of the beautiful things in life matures also. But not all people are any wiser when old, just as not only old people are wise.

Good luck to you though. All good things come in good time.

Lastly: I have explored your blog a bit more thoroughly this time and have realized that all your work is original. Please do forgive me for my previous ignorance..


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